Monday, August 22, 2011

Haiku Monday: Walk


Walk, talk and chew gum?
Presidential candidates!
Vote for Juicy Fruit.

The Clutch Strut

Must these damn rappers
clutch their stuff and scream out loud?
Walk that walk elsewhere.


Will you? Kiss my feet.
If. I walk a mile in yours.
Will you love me still?


moi said...

Heh to first one. Yup to second (although I'm a fan of Eminem) and hmm to last one. That's got some meaning I can't quite suss out, but I like it anyway.

Sharon Rudd said...

I vote for #3. Love the visual, and the yin-yan of the haiku. Although Master Basho would probably disagree with my description :)

Happy Haiku Monday!

Aunty Belle said...

Rapper's is all grotesque--I hear ya Fishy.

Jenny said...

honestly, the crotch grabbing was old the moment the first person did it. I get it. I get it. You have a crotch.

I like the first one.

Happy Haiku Monday.

Madeleine Begun Kane said...

All three of them are a delight!

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Princess said...

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Have a good weekend and we will see you Monday!