Monday, January 30, 2012

Haiku Monday: Rain



Furious  rain pelts
my anguish ... cleansing my grief.
Joy crests in my soul.

6 comments:

Aunty Belle said...

j'adore a furious storm over the ocean1 Very movin' Haiku.

moi said...

I really like this one, Fishy. The way it moves from fury to calm in just a few short syllables. Happy Haiku Monday and good luck!

pam said...

I love this haiku also. Nothing so soul-cleansing as heavy rain --- or heavy tears.

Boxer said...

LOVE the visual with the Haiku. "Joy crests in my soul" is really good.

serendipitouswildmoments said...

Hi Fishy,

I really liked your haiku and the photo. Lots of natural power.

Haiku Monday theme is up at http://serendipitouswildmoments.wordpress.com/2012/02/01/haiku-monday/

Come play.

Serendipity

Scout said...

Gosh... I feel all Of the emotion. Waves and waves. I needed this - sharing in it. Thanks fish