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Monday, May 20, 2013

Haiku Monday: Innocent Love


Really, did I care
about braces or muscles?
No! Just happiness.




No armor needed, 
no fear,  completely trusting
Dad love is mighty




Friendly little bums
explore, experience, share
 love, on life's first beach



Blushing in his joy,
this man-boy knows  his future,
She is his only.





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12 comments:

  1. RebeccaMay 20, 2013 at 5:40 PM

    loved the bare bottom one too cute you always have the best Haiku

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    1. fishyMay 23, 2013 at 10:18 PM

      Thank you, glad you enjoyed the beach bums :-D

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  2. DoomMay 20, 2013 at 6:56 PM

    Those are AWESOME.

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    1. fishyMay 23, 2013 at 6:28 AM

      Such a surprising word from the man called Doom! Thanks.

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  3. KarlMay 21, 2013 at 7:42 PM

    Good evening Fishy,

    Well done.

    So fess up, is the last one you and Blowfish?

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    1. fishyMay 23, 2013 at 6:30 AM

      LOL
      Blowfish was 40 something when we met.

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  4. AnonymousMay 21, 2013 at 11:04 PM

    I don't know how Doom narrowed yours down to just one winner, Fishy. These are all great.

    Serendipity

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    1. fishyMay 23, 2013 at 6:36 AM

      Thank you! That's big praise from a woman who writes haiku like you!

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  5. darkfoamMay 22, 2013 at 5:19 AM

    Serendipity took the words out of my mouth. Congratulations!

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    1. fishyMay 23, 2013 at 6:39 AM

      I am still smiling about those hickies! I still remember my Moms reaction to the first one she saw on my brother!

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  6. RebeccaMay 24, 2013 at 5:19 PM

    Congrats on your win can't wait to see what you come up with for this week

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  7. DoomMay 26, 2013 at 3:28 AM

    Hrumph! *cough*

    Uhrm, Fishy? Teh contest?

    -knocking on teh screen-
    *tap, tap*

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