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Monday, April 25, 2011

Haiku Monday: The Visual Chicken




Peter's denial:

Three times he disowned
Jesus, fearing through the night;
weeping by cock's crow











Genesis:

Articulated
counter-balanced skeleton
defines this raptor














Reclamation:

Frida, renew'd by
chickens colorful wisdom,
laid life without grief





Monster.com:

One comic artist/
chicken strip author for
syndicated wealth!








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12 comments:

  1. AnonymousApril 25, 2011 at 3:27 PM

    #2 but change articulating to articulated and lose both commas.

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  2. chickoryApril 25, 2011 at 3:40 PM

    I agree with troll - thats the best and the coolest image too. however, I love peters denial - oh the grief and remorse he mustve felt! Then of course I love the Frida (no ""E" by the way)

    As usual you have lots of great ones. I would go with 2. Decide soon though, Alicia, the judge, will review them tomorrow morning.

    happy HM!

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  3. JennyApril 25, 2011 at 4:14 PM

    I love the chicken x-ray visual and sorry you have to decide on just one. I agree with Troll and Chickory on number 2.

    They are all fabulous as usual.

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  4. Aunty BelleApril 25, 2011 at 4:47 PM

    Agree wif' Troll--an' the word articulated be's much better--never use the ING form when possible to avoid unless it ya mean to describe somethin' in process / moving at the moment that ya' mean to indicate.

    I likes the subject matter of Peter's denial bestest, as it has most potential fer deep emotional recognition, somethin' good Haiku oughta do--an "Aha! " moment. Keep workin' that one around an' it will surpass the Articulated One.

    But mah favorite visual is Frida.

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  5. chickoryApril 25, 2011 at 5:19 PM

    just waiting for you to make corrections if you plan to before posting to my page


    *foot tap tap tap*

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  6. Sharon RuddApril 25, 2011 at 5:32 PM

    Great offerings, as always! Happy Haiku Monday!

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  7. fishyApril 25, 2011 at 5:52 PM

    All,
    thanks for the info!
    Chickory, quit tapping.
    I am brewing on another.

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  8. moiApril 25, 2011 at 9:17 PM

    It's number two for me, too! Next fave is Frida's.

    Good luck, Fishy!

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  9. Kymical ReactionsApril 25, 2011 at 10:00 PM

    Oh Fishy! How dare you make us choose! These are all so wonderful! I do like the one chosen. Very strong contender. x.

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  10. fishyApril 26, 2011 at 8:54 AM

    Thanks all,
    my favorite was "Reclamation" as it seems to me Frida and Chickory both have cottoned on to the healing power of chickens. I went with majority advice so thanks again for helping, I cannot seem to be less dithery about the haikus.

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  11. sparringK9April 26, 2011 at 9:39 AM

    come back and take the poll again. i installed a better widget

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  12. KarlApril 29, 2011 at 11:01 AM

    Good morning Fishy,

    I like Genesis myself.

    If you get a minute stop by I posted a few shots of the neighbors.

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