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Sunday, February 27, 2011

Haiku Monday: Peace











Peace be with you. Cock
crows thrice before morning light.
Benediction road. 



Mornings give birth to
Crowing rooster reminders
Peace be unto you.


Paradise gardens
destination seekers sow
peaceful opposites
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9 comments:

  1. moiFebruary 28, 2011 at 9:04 AM

    Very nice, especially the last one. My neighbor's rooster crows more than three times every morning and one of these days, I'm going to deny him his feathers.

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  2. sparringK9February 28, 2011 at 9:26 AM

    all very mindful of the upcoming Lenten season. I liked # 1 best -working in 4 syllable benediction is key.

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  3. sparringK9February 28, 2011 at 9:27 AM

    my entry is here

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  4. fishyFebruary 28, 2011 at 11:06 AM

    Moi,
    I have experienced neighboring roosters before, the really exuberant ones can be annoying.

    This is true of the human variety too :-)


    K9,
    Yes it is mindful of Lenten lessons.
    I can never decide if I best like haikus which have a very specific message or the ones with layers.

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 28, 2011 at 2:31 PM

    Very nice. I had roosters and basset hounds singin wake-up breakfast harmony for a few years.

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  6. JennyFebruary 28, 2011 at 3:52 PM

    I like them all.

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  7. Milk River MadmanFebruary 28, 2011 at 5:22 PM

    All good. As usual.

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  8. Kymical ReactionsMarch 2, 2011 at 9:12 PM

    Fishy! x!

    Come on over for the big baby reveal!

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  9. Aunty BelleMarch 4, 2011 at 4:54 PM

    Fishy!

    Come see what I done bought from a blogger....come see.

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