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Monday, January 24, 2011

Haiku Monday: STATE

All rise! State you case,
Testify to  Huck's 'nigger'.
Elusive justice.


State obedience?
Millions for Rahm from Freddie?
Get out of my face.


Union as onion.
Peeling layers of deceits.
Teleprompted state.
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8 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 24, 2011 at 9:37 AM

    Wow. The third one is superlative.

    Don't forget to post at TS! And to enter the SW 30K one.

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  2. Buzz KillJanuary 24, 2011 at 9:51 AM

    We kind of went with the same subject in #3. "layers of deceits" - damn right.

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  3. moiJanuary 24, 2011 at 11:31 AM

    Everyone be hatin' on the gooberment! I like it. I'm also very much diggin' your third haiku. This decision will be difficult.

    But, yes, make sure you post at Troll's!

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  4. fishyJanuary 24, 2011 at 12:50 PM

    Troll,
    Thank you. Looking forward to the
    BooDo golf report! How was the fair?

    Buzz,
    I'm thinking there is enough deceit to go around. More weeds than garden in your state these days? Clever Buzz, as always!

    Moi,
    Thanks for judging! Accords Troll some well deserved playground time.

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  5. JennyJanuary 24, 2011 at 1:01 PM

    I really like your third one too. Peeling away something that makes your eye sting.

    No kidding.

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  6. fishyJanuary 24, 2011 at 1:08 PM

    Boxer,
    Exactly!
    We are all stung and crying!



    Troll,
    My SW 30K haiku:

    Romantic surfing
    Balance of power and, force
    Gulf tumbled lovers

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  7. JennyJanuary 24, 2011 at 9:46 PM

    I liked your Boeing one too. They left Washington State to escape the Unions... or did they?

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  8. fishyJanuary 25, 2011 at 6:07 AM

    State of my unions
    Two spirits entwined by love
    Or lust. Or both. Sigh.

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